Episode 45: Job In search of 101

Need to write gross sales emails like a professional?

Kristina and Will take a look at frequent e-mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them so as to be taught what to do otherwise.

Be a part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Development Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.

Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇


Topic: Lavender Advertising Profession Query

Hello there!

My identify is Hopeful Worker, and I got here throughout your e-mail advertising and marketing product on LinkedIn. I used to be just lately laid off from BigCompany (a unicorn AI software program firm) and so have been job looking out and effectively, I believed I’d take an opportunity and simply attain out to ask if y’all are hiring.

I’m a content material marketer (based mostly in coolplace) who loves to put in writing and make content material within the B2B house. I’m continually intrigued by AI and the way it helps companies use or promote merchandise, and write customer-facing content material that not solely offers solutions, however positions corporations as thought leaders ✍

I do know it is a lengthy shot, however on the off probability you’re on the lookout for a full time content material marketer, I’d be honored to be thought of. It looks like a extremely cool product, and an excellent enjoyable group (I noticed how a few of the group dressed as wizards and went to SaaStr and Dreamforce!). I’m attaching my resume to this e-mail.

Thanks, and I sit up for listening to from you!



Take 1

Topic: Open Advertising Function?

Between the group’s posts & the noise you made at SaaStr- it’s clear your org values advertising and marketing.

I’m on the lookout for my subsequent position & I needed to see in case you’re hiring.

Researching, I used to be a bit stunned you don’t have a weblog.

I used to do that at coolplace. That is one thing I might are available in and assist with day 1.

Is that this one thing you’re trying to rent for?


Ps. As you understand, writing expertise can at all times be utilized elsewhere if a weblog isn’t high precedence.


Take 2

Topic: Lavender Advertising Profession Query

Hello Will,

I’m on the lookout for a advertising and marketing position, and I needed to see if Lavender is hiring for advertising and marketing.

As somebody who’s labored in social – I’m loving what y’all put on the market.

I used to be just lately half of a big lay off at coolplace. I used to be writing and optimizing weblog content material for them. Thought that might be useful.

I need to preserve refining that talent set, however I feel an early stage firm would enable me to see the way it suits into the larger image.

Do you assume my speculation is true? In that case, would like to see if I might be an asset to the group.


Have a query about your gross sales e-mail? Begin a dialogue in the neighborhood.

The publish Episode 45: Job In search of 101 appeared first on Gross sales Hacker.